Wednesday, March 5, 2008

The Cry Comments

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i cried as i came
for the world i saw
was not the world i crave
the world i saw
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hamid kareem
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The Lost.. 02 January 2010

it's a very nice poem...keep writing :) and thnx for sharing.

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Tanganyika Nelson 19 March 2008

Nothing is promised to you. Every thing happems and look the way it do for a reason. Weather its a lifetime, season, or reason. Think about it.

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Yonela Mali 12 March 2008

now i finally understand why babies cry when they are born all thanx to you. beautiful piece

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Pandora Chaos 11 March 2008

I reall ylike this poem its good. keep writing! ! ! !

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