Thursday, March 10, 2005

The Crust Of The Sweetiepie Comments

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...and if YOU are the crust
and I am the filling
I would think that you must
be so ready and willing
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 March 2005

What would happen? Hugging is out (at least at the door) because of the pie I am carrying, kissing is out because we don't know each other well enough, leaves the aforementioned pie feast. What do you think? I could hold the pie behind your back? I hope we can write a couple more like this, I am having great fun and enjoy the sparks that survive the long journey because of their innate quality. Best wishes, H

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Anong All 10 March 2005

Interesting poem Herbert.., Wonder if one day you will arrive at my door..........?

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dissatified exmember 10 March 2005

Very clever connotations my friend. the usual ten from me. Hugs Jan

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Sandra Osborne 10 March 2005

Very, very well done, but your poetry is making my sugar rise.. ;)

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