...and if YOU are the crust
and I am the filling
I would think that you must
be so ready and willing
...
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Interesting poem Herbert.., Wonder if one day you will arrive at my door..........?
Very clever connotations my friend. the usual ten from me. Hugs Jan
Very, very well done, but your poetry is making my sugar rise.. ;)
What would happen? Hugging is out (at least at the door) because of the pie I am carrying, kissing is out because we don't know each other well enough, leaves the aforementioned pie feast. What do you think? I could hold the pie behind your back? I hope we can write a couple more like this, I am having great fun and enjoy the sparks that survive the long journey because of their innate quality. Best wishes, H