Tuesday, January 5, 2010

The Cruetly Of The Undefined Path Comments

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How I long envied the fated ones with passions to define them.
Breathing work as natural as gravity.
The weight of their initiatives warping the fabric of their lives.
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DeAnna Esquilin
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Wandering Scarlet 10 January 2010

Perhaps one of the greatest Philosophical questions is mentioned here, and that is how are humans different from animals, and what is man's purpose? beatiful write.

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That was so good! I love your metaphors and similes. Awesome comparisons, between that of the natural world and our own world. It is one in the same, yet how do we feel so separated from each other. I really like your line 'nature never appears to be in conflict with its design'. Nice poem!

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DeAnna Esquilin

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