Wednesday, June 9, 2010

The Crows Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I walked along the melancholic street
Below the streetlamp where shadows meet
I perceived a blackened perpetual spree
'Oh, the crows are crowding up the tree'
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R. Ariffin
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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2012

Very sad, but well expressed. Clear images. Good analogy. Sound message.10

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