Friday, April 13, 2012

The Crow Is Coming Comments

Rating: 5.0

The candles burning
the clock is ticking
time is running out
for the evil that is rising
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Dave Alan Walker
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Keith Durante 18 April 2012

The Crow has indeed come. It is alive in your words which touch my soul and bring a tear of joy. This is a fantastic metaphor that reaches inside me and stirs the hope I have that all will be well within us soon. Keep writing my fellow traveler of time. I will read more of your work, this piece floored me.

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Heather Wilson 16 April 2012

Time running out on evil is so true, a really great poem.

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Eric Cockrell 14 April 2012

now is the time! great poem!

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Ramesh Rai 14 April 2012

a nice poem, a brilliant write.

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