Friday, March 23, 2012

The Crow Flies Comments

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A single crow flies,
flies to free the soul
from the flesh of the one
who's been laid to rest
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Dave Alan Walker
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Harindhar Reddy 26 March 2012

Your poem is truesome with meaning awesome as Single crows are always in a hurry to meet the someone's soul. Most of the times Single hands are taken for a ride. Nevertheless, Can see a hope of finding a beautiful soul....... Thank you......

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Wahab Abdul 24 March 2012

wonderful poem! a crow flies to free the soul of the people who have been laid to rest , till this ok and marvellous, but from the flesh? this phrase needs to be explained as laid persons do have flesh....thanks.

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Kumar Parashar 24 March 2012

simple but moving. really nice poem mr. walker.

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Bharat Mehru 24 March 2012

Nice poem.Uncommon thought, i like the poem as well as the angle.

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invalid Files 23 March 2012

New outlook to such a sinister bird: ] I liked it!

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