Thursday, January 10, 2019

The Crook - Inspired By The Brook By Alfred Tennyson Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the hottest fire
I quietly alight,
with a burning desire
To change the world's plight.
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 10 January 2019

Your title is so appealing that I read the poem twice to understand the true meaning of your title and in the end I realise that what you are upto is that the arrogance of the latter has a tail lights from the seventh sky to reach the earth and realise that during his journey how we feels about and how arrogant he remains however in the end it is the human soul that realises that life is nothing but to enjoy and live in peace

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Rini Shibu 10 January 2019

I liked this journey and the flow..beautiful

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 January 2019

What a way to do introspection and self realization: I hung my head in shame I thought it will earn me some fame People will remember my name But now everything looks to be vain Now I learned, with burning desire Yet with warm heart If your purpose is to be admired Then make the journey smooth and smart.

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Rajnish Manga 10 January 2019

I have shuttled from here to there and from Crook to the Brook. I am glad you have taken right cues to keep the flow going in the case of The Crook. AT will be so happy to find a suitable match for his poem though with a bit of smile.

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