Tuesday, November 3, 2015

The Cripple Comments

Rating: 4.5

Bent on a pair of crutches
he makes his tentative move.

Stretching the left crutch
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Ajit Das
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Rajnish Manga 03 November 2015

You have portrayed with perfection the mindset and movements of a man walking with the help of crutches. Amazing poem. Thanks. I quote: The backdrop pins him / a sagging figure, incongruous / on the tapestry of life.

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2015

Truly inspiring poem, last stanza was amazing...Loved it....Ajitji....Slowly he looks up, starts afresh. A rhythm peculiar to him measures his steps on a scale of new, resolute move. I invite u to read my poems.

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 November 2015

I sense a new beginning from the blessing above. Lovely poem Ajit.

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