Saturday, March 28, 2015

The Criminal Man Comments

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Oh the poor one
you are asking me why I love you
But I am sure you know about love nothing
Not even like the Ripper
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Baharak Barzin
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Bharati Nayak 23 December 2016

Pains and sufferings of a love lorn heart.Love is the tormentor that kills and takes the person in its grip without his permission.- - A poem of unique kind, thanks for sharing.

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Daniel Brick 22 December 2016

Wow! This poem is uncompromising in its expose of evil intentions and the damage they case. But there another kind of evil which is a-moral, it just is a power set against our human life. Like the Plague in your poem it kills us for no reason incapable of any emotion good or bad. These are the experiences which challenge out deep beliefs in goodness and hope

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Baharak Barzin 22 December 2016

Yes Daniel You understand my words very well

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Narguess Sabetti 26 September 2015

Dear Baharak, you think in a beautiful way. the poem contains some deep philosophical notions making the reader contemplate.

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