Saturday, September 1, 2018

The Cries Of A Wounded Black Bird Comments

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There was a rustle in the leaves in the back garden
As a black bird slid out in sight, dragging a broken wing,
In pain, helpless and panting.
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Mohabeer Beeharry
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Susan Williams 11 September 2018

Stunning! ! ! ! ! ! Absolutely Stunning! ! ! ! ! ! ! It caught my heart with the first three lines but it never got maudlin - -it spoke straight from the soul and this poem deserves to be Poem of the Day over and over again. Very spiritual.10++++++ and onto my fav list

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