Tuesday, January 28, 2025

The Creek That Never Reaches The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the quiet cradle of the valley,
a creek winds, murmuring soft secrets,
its waters glinting like scattered dreams,
trickling over stones, smooth with time,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2025

You have given a magical beauty to the creek with your masterstroke. What a beautiful poem embellished with sparkling poetic expressions and superb imagery. To my Favorites!

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Martinez Salotori 03 February 2025

Some wishes remains unfulfilled and only Almighty knows why? ? ? . Great poem.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 February 2025

A lovely and engaging tale of the creek, which is woven through human lives. Thank you for sharing.

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M. Asim Nehal

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