Thursday, August 30, 2018

The Creature (Inspired By Mary Shelly) Comments

Rating: 5.0

emotions escalate
upward,
onward.
seaward swelling waves
...
Read full text

Andy Brookes
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 03 September 2018

Lusus Naturae! ? that was my first wife's maiden name! ! ! lu·sus na·tu·rae ˌlo͞osəs nəˈt(y) o͝orˌē, ˌlo͞osəs nəˈt(y) o͝orˌī/ noun rare noun: lusus naturae; plural noun: lusus naturae a freak of nature. Oh! i KNEW there was a good reason she and i didn't last. we were too much ALIKE! ! bri :) I'll take a chance and send to MyPoemList. but: stitches! needs 2 't's

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

Like swelling waves emotions take a man upward. Winter's depth motivates mind. Life brings joy after birth but death provokes thought and brings sadness. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned. Truth should be accepted....10

0 0 Reply
Andy Brookes

Andy Brookes

Macclesfield
Close
Error Success