Saturday, April 19, 2008

The Creation Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

The birds and the bees, the flowers, and trees,
The stars in the sky, the little butterflies.
The rivers and creeks, the cool summer breeze,
The clouds and the leaves, the plants, and the seeds,
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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Jean Dament 20 January 2010

You described so beautifully here in this lovely poem.all that God created in nature. Thanks for sharing as it was a joy to read. Spiritsong

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Abha Sharma 19 April 2008

A nice way to recognize the Almighty’s worth, the creation is magnanimous and we sometimes fail to appreciate this. The fusion of the living and inanimate objects covering the three entities WATER, AIR and LAND are done wonderfully by you.

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C.R. Clark 19 April 2008

Yes, God made it all AND He made it right. I hope, one day we (mankind) will learn to treat it right. Thanks Loyd. An Excellent write. Richard

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