The crane spreads its wings, while the snake coils to strike
Both have great agility, and flamboyance when they fight
The crane hops, the snake slithers
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hehehe, i love the way it was ended, It's rhythm and rhyme as well...I just love reading it. It reminds me of the saying Love your enemies. thank you. a highest 10 of course! 😁 Cheryl♡
I love poems about animals. This one is very well done. Most of my last poems have also been about animals. In fact, you may be interested to know that my last one (just posted today) was called Square Poems 13: Tiger Acrostic.
It reminds me of one I wrote some time ago entitled Great Blue Heron- after watching the bird's encounter with a snake.
A beautiful comparison of the crane and the snake.