The Cradle Of Life Comments
It was just another dawn;
It was just another wind.
The streets were empty
And the town was silent in her voice.
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She knew no perils; She was in the cradle of life. The schedules of life troubled her not, She was innocence personified. Hi ravi great post, , , very nice lines...tender and loving vheers
Your words are delivered with the unmistakable stamp of a true poet. There is a musicality in your writing which is hypnotic and enchants the writer. Your story is poignant - a small slice of life that you capture with compassion and a light touch. Your cradle of life rocks sweetly. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Dat wuz beautiful i loved it really! ! 10++ DLG
a great write. it shows one who is seeing life, and the other living that life.
nice poem poet Ravi a nice clarify for a speciall feeling good job actually and thanks for sharing
What a lovely walk through the town Ravi. lost myself in the tranquil imagery yet reality Thank you
Reading this poem I was jut taken into trance... That beautiful dawn.. and its feels and tales. My trance just stopped at moment The reality entered into... 'That women with cleaning too The baby beside...' At the helm of affairs Writer brought a reality show. Yes this is life. Good write.
Ravi thank you for taking me on that beautiful walk.. I really enjoyed it... it was sooooo uplifting... regards Alf
'May the bud spread the sweetness of dales, May the kid wither not in the winds'. ------- great wish and hopes in the cradle of life. Stunning poetic story written, meaningful poem written...........10
What a beautiful walk through life told with finesse..great write Ravi - felicitations 10
This is absolutely breathtaking. The story is told so creatively and the cradle and the trusting child bring such deep emotion. 10 Karin Anderson
a very pleasing poem..innocence of the kid just like the dawn..not a clue of the previous day on its face....10
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9/4/2025 5:47:26 AM # 1.0.0
wonderful lines. it took me back to my days when i was in Bangladesh. this was a common scene when i would go for a morning walk.thanks for sharing.