Sunday, October 1, 2017

The Cracked Mirror Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have put in your room all you need
If it's deficient now, it's your misdeed.
Your hate, your violence, your greed!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 03 October 2017

Brilliant write about the hate, greed and violence of this world, the cracked mirror is a reflection of the ugly truth of the curse of hate, greed and violence! Outstanding write! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2017

Hate, violence and greed like vices have captured modern world people and Earth is burning in sorrow, burdens and hatred. This seems to be like a broken mirror. This provokes thought entirely. Replacing the mirror to have beautiful reflection is nice. Promise should be given before God to have peace and love around us. Brilliant poem is excellently penned.10

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Nosheen Irfan 02 October 2017

Very profound write from your mighty pen. Man is weak n full of flaws hence the world is full of problems.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 October 2017

A poem that rhymes beautifully. I gave you a mirror that has been cracked. You! My image in it! Has been hijacked! Laughing mirror now, as you're off tracked! I gave you thoughts to frame the laws You polluted it, now it has many flaws. Damaged stitching with your own claws! Very well done.10+

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