Tuesday, March 6, 2012

The Crack Of Dawn Comments

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Will you see the crack of dawn tomorrow?
Will you feel the smooth soft breeze of the dawn tomorrow?
Will you see the stars tonight?
Will you feel the still silence breeze tonight?
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Doris Dzameshie
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Karen Deeks 06 March 2012

A real nice piece... My favourite line is (Dancing to the eternal rhythm of birth and death) . We never know truly what tomorrow will put out for us and if indeed we will see the crack of Dawn. Enjoyable poignant write... Thank you.., Karen

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