In the dense hazy morn
Horizon beyond recognition
The monsoon not yet resigned
The crows still nest-crouched
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Liked the use of local words in this poem, it's a marvelous poem.
Beautiful Memories! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
thank you dear Rebecca. the childhhod memories are so much enthralling to reminiscent that even the times of misseries distant past becomes most enjoyable tomes of ones life latter.your appreciation is an encouragement.
very nice and vivid retrieval of distant memory that had both romantic and economic livelihood base.
very nice and viviv retrieval of distant memory that had both romantic and economic livelihood base.
thank you poet.though livelihood of the rural folks prima facie seems tough and struggling, the truthfulness they learn through these daily activities and the fruits of labour they earn leave linger imprints in their personal attributes. thank you for appreciating the poem.
A beautiful write with scientific temper......Thanks for sharing, , , , ,10