Monday, June 4, 2018

The Crab And The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shallow water
and the sand
were teasing my feet,
when I met
...
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Aufie Zophy
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2018

Oh what a fantastic expression you have painted on nature espicially on sun, clouds, and crabs dear Zophy! I appreciate your inscription. Thanks for sharing.10

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Valsa George 10 June 2018

A poet is so observant of all that happens around him in Nature! On the sea strand you watch the mother and the baby crab... a very interesting image! In the sky too you see the projection of the crab in the clouds. As you continue to watch, you see red coloring the East and the waking sun slowly peeping out making the surroundings brighter! Enjoyed the depiction of Nature in its pristine beauty!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 June 2018

THOUGH long but a very beautiful story

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 June 2018

Wow, what a brilliant write. The interplay of nature is vividly depicted in this marvelous poem. Only a great poet can transmit such beauty in such striking words. 10 and onto my Poem List.

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