The Courage Of A Bee Comments

While waiting, Zachary, to see if my earlier-sent comments show up, I'll say: '' think I've seen such spiders, sitting 'innocently' on a blossom, waiting for its prey! '

four **** stars

I like the 'bee/23' rhyme. ;) I DON'T like 1- lack of punctuation and 2 - all lines being started with a CAPITAL letter, ...but I'll live ; (

The 'courage of a bee' may be 'only' inbred instinct. I wonder if there is pain felt by the bee whose intestines os ripped out. Who designed bees that way! ? ? ? ? Imagine hitting someone and having YOUR arm fall off! ! : (

The transition, between st.1 and stanza 2, I think would be clearer to Readers if you used '....hidden-in: a feathered Bee Eater, a Robber Fly, ....' I think I saw one of those spiders once lying in wait in a blossom.

suggestion for 'But also dangers hidden-in': 'But also dangers, hidden.'

You have great talent, I may be young but I can tell. It's a shame not more people appreciate your work.

Very informative poem dear Huang.