The Count Down Ring Comments

This poem definitely has a real ring to it! !

Beneath a group of frozen clouds we see the beauty of waning moon and we feel the mood of raining. Natural perception is excellently brought up. Before a sea of stoic waves a smiling fate will of course rise with beauty of sun. This poem has rich imagery and this is excellent one.

Beneath a group of frozen clouds/Bereft of raining moods/Beneath a bunch of aging stars/Bemused to wink or shine....sparkling expression! A beautiful poem! You are not taking vote on this poem, I would have awarded 10/10

Great poetic thought and lovely expression

A wonderful poem with a great message. Even if we are in a difficult situation, fate can smile at us in God's own time. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

‘Beside a smiling fate, he remains; /Begins the counting down...’ Climaxed here ‘smiling fate’ and remembering it…and ‘down-counting’…just made a little paradigm shift Sir excuse me 10//10++ hf Ms. Nivedita UK

How everything conspires at one's dawning. Veery well written.

Count Down, a stage, we all will fall into Dear poet, is it so painful? so murky? Each line gives a punch of its own Apparent, a truth beyond any doubt. Wonderful lines...

A wonderful poem. Love & hugs.................

Every being has its counting down. Why this one would be in bad wheather? Good writing, I enjoyed it.

For me it is your best work sir. There are so many emotions engraved in this poem. Thank you for this piece. 10++++++++++++++++++++

very poetic, a lone man amidst the back dropp of the world, the ambience well created great work sir-10

In these days, when some so-called poets divorse all the aids to poetry like alliteration, personification, rhyme, rhythm etc. and present some bland prose-like pieces in the guise of poems, this poem is like a fresh breath of air in sultry weather. All the lines starting with a 'B' and your reference to Nature in a multiple ways are a couple of remarkable features of this poem. Truly well-crafted.

Very nice! Love it :)

The strength to persevere comes through this to me. Thanks for sharing your poetry. I truly enjoy your work.

Glorious creation! Congratulation!

By far the best poem i have read in many days....this is a genious creation! unbelievably arresting write, thanks for sharing....And a 10++++++++! ! ! !

wow! i like this poem so much!

Beautifully crafted, brilliant an' bittersweet, man beneficent betwix n between the brutal elements begins - ' the count down'... A bountiful amount of 'B's' here... *10*! ! ! Best wishes Kesav! Friend Thad

Under so many objects up above and all around the solitary man the count down begins well here.