Thursday, February 6, 2014

The Council And The Devil Comments

Rating: 5.0

They are like poisonous snakes
that never stop biting
etching their venom
deep within your soul
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Dave Alan Walker
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 February 2014

Yeah the devil's lure and lair is a horible trap and entrapment, and cud keep one stuck in the mud of wrongful harmful ideas. Aweinspiring poem! Great to read.

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Valerie Dohren 08 February 2014

There's no escape from them Dave - very good write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 February 2014

A Wonderful poem with in-depth meaning. Beautiful lines... They are like poisonous snakes that never stop biting etching their venom deep within your soul......Very true said in few lines. They are never going to change...They will just keep on trapping others. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Dave Alan Walker

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