Saturday, November 29, 2008

The Cost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look the same
as I did yesterday
as I stare into the mirror
Just the same girl
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Joan Hart
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Carl Harris 10 February 2009

This is one of those rare poems that is impressive more for what it does not say than what it actually does, Caroline. The unspoken words say volumes, so well framed by the words in this poem. It is again a very well thought out poem and far from a slap-dash effort of just getting words on paper. You indeed have an exceptional talent for poetry. Carl.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 November 2008

nicely captured-feeling inside-10

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Joseph Poewhit 29 November 2008

Hard looks at yourself can hurt

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