The Cosmos Turns Wild (In A Dream) Comments

A beautifully written piece, Kanav. Thanks

A truly spectacular poem dear Kanav. We sorely miss your poems on Poem Hunter. I am proud to add this poem to 'my poem list.' Wishing you all the best in life and in your endeavor.

Wonderful imagery Kanav.Rachel is right.It seems everything is going on before our eyes!

...........loved the first two stanzas the best.....they have an intimate feel to them....love being alone on a warm summer's night looking at the stars......it's like you carried me there to the balcony to look upon the twinkling stars in the beautiful night sky.....loved reading every line... ...................................................~~~~~~ LOVE LOVE LOVE ~~~~~~.............................................

An epic sci-fi poem Kanav, enjoyed reading, and well done.

Nicely penned, rich in imagery and message

From a winsome title to rhymin skill this was one of yor most fabulous poem mr. Kash! Wows!

an epic write up, kanav! i felt Hyperion in a scene...thanks for this write!

The dark sky and its hidden things make fine subjects for poetry and Kanav`s eyes and mind have captured a few of them brilliantly... Here is a reflection of it... A fine write.

Again a brilliant write kanav.

and as the world ends in peace tonight there be no soul left alone in your arms, gladly i would die and none is left to mourn................... A beautiful end................ ]] I am glad that this nocturnal scene was a dream That fades away, scorched by sun's bright gleam...... But deathly figures that dance about, and in your visions frighteningly loom, Towards the judgement that awaits, we humans go, into the arms of ending doom................................ .............................A lovely write my friend, a 10 for u.......

'staring at the world far far away adorned by the stars was the night i explored the sky, heart filled with joy as my eyes travelled distances infinite'........ Beauty in rhyming verse....! Enjoyed this nocturnal scene... A 10