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With the break of dawning day,
Feathered folks greet the world,
In resonant notes of alluring songs,
They fill the hearts with rapturous glee.
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The cadence of this poem has the same musicality as the sound of Nature, and it is a delight to read it out loud. Lovely rhyme and rhythm, and powerful poetic expression!
The cadence of your poem has the same musicality as the sound of Nature's music, and it is a delight to read it out loud. Powerful poetic expression!
favorite lines: On fluttering wings the gentle breeze, Comes down, to tickle the tender leaves, and: ‘The frayed nerves' stroll to the beach, ...................party after work? =============================== SPIRALLING.............the esp. British spelling! verb (used without object) , spiraled, spiraling or (especially British) spiralled, spiralling. 12. to take a spiral form or course. 13. to advance or increase steadily; rise: Costs have been spiraling all year. 14. Aeronautics. to fly an airplane through a spiral course ============================================ Played in league with the Cosmic Band. ...................i went to a Cosmic Band concert in college, but i was too stoned to pay any attention to it. bri :)
Music hides in every heart, Its celestial strains nourish the lives, Tune it right with prudent care, Lest it die in the cacophony of sounds. Amazing!
From dawn to dusk the day is celebrated in your inimitable style which is very captivating, Mesmerizing poem.!
The winged beauties, their alluring melodies and the cosmic connotations have a poet`s permission to create an impact of the kind on the minds of the lesser mortals. The pinnacle of gloom is painted in the snow of righteous philosophy while the feeble fears take a back seat for a moment.
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7/29/2025 4:41:45 AM # 1.0.0
A fantastic expression has been made by you on cosmic, nature and music. So brilliant and amusing. I want to cite some lines here.....On fluttering wings the gentle breeze, / Comes down, to tickle the tender leaves, / Together do they sing and dance, / In delightful chorus to thrill the hearts......glistening streams, ....They muse a melody so sweet to hear. Marvelous poem.10