The Cosmic Being Comments
Nothing is immortal on this earth
Saved the marks you leave behind
In the last journey you perform
Quite untimely and unwarrantedly
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Nothing is immortal ~ that's true Again Nothing is mortal! ~ it's to me Disappearance is the existence of the mysterious existent present! Disappeared the name of mortality!
Patient and tolerant earth Monitiring and assessing Thought, word, and deed Great ideas
Thanks a lot Suresh Kumar, the cosmic assessment is being done without the knowledge of the assessed
The best poem of today I have read. Yes we are in cosmic surveillance. Nice poem.5****
Thank you very much dear Aarzoo Mehek. Many do not think about the cosmic survelliance
Such an excellent little poem! Pragmatic and quite perceptive...5 stars
Thank you Dr. Dillip for the kind reading and profound evaluation
Thank you so much dear poet.Every action of human beings is seriously taken into account for the betterment of life
Thank you very much for such a valuable comment
Brilliant Poem. Indeed, human activities are in cosmic surveillance now and always.10**
Thank you for the comment dear Asim, realising the truth is knowledge and a good percentage of human beings do not take it serious
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7/27/2025 8:50:19 PM # 1.0.0
Nothing is permanent on earth! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you very much dear Edward Kofi Louis