The Corrupt Comments

I agree with you.

Awesome. Simply awesome.

Dave... I like! I Like!

There is good, but bad too everywhere and in every profession. This is your truth.

It's a corrupt world.And this great poem exposes it all.Lovely.Thank you very much sir

The evil we do spites back. In two sentences or two stanzas, you have given the everlasting truth. Fantastic! Deserves 100% and more. Dragging till the end, you struck with the time-tested fact. Cheers!

a concise comment on things that go on in so many parts of the world where those in power abuse that duty of care....good and strong, Dave

Reminds me of the innocent people who are arrested and beaten up by the police and even after being released, they are looked down upon by everyone.

WE've got a good one over here Dave!

evil in bad men takes on all shapes and hides to only show itself to do the devils deed. good poem my friend, let us not forget!

Good interpretation, well done.

like a snake that eats itself - oh yes.

nice piece on the corruption of power and the damage that it causes

karma.... violent karma the worst! great piece!

thanks for the invite :) your poem is really gooood keep up the good work!

how true, how true. Police power sommetimes goes to their head. I have seen it many times. Good Insight

that's the reality which most people do not understand...........for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. For the human beings also the same will happen...........as the fate.

Well done, Dave! Thank you for sharing.

arts - a great way of standing against the snake of corruption; very good! ! !