The Corrupt Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The Corrupt

Rating: 4.6


A policeman stands
knowing his lies
have just destroyed
a life

But like a snake
That eats itself
it will all come
back around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 18 January 2012

The evil we do spites back. In two sentences or two stanzas, you have given the everlasting truth. Fantastic! Deserves 100% and more. Dragging till the end, you struck with the time-tested fact. Cheers!

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Raj Arumugam 18 January 2012

a concise comment on things that go on in so many parts of the world where those in power abuse that duty of care....good and strong, Dave

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Supriya Prathapan 17 January 2012

Reminds me of the innocent people who are arrested and beaten up by the police and even after being released, they are looked down upon by everyone.

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Jeline Loh Jen-Li 16 January 2012

WE've got a good one over here Dave!

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Federico del Corazón 16 January 2012

evil in bad men takes on all shapes and hides to only show itself to do the devils deed. good poem my friend, let us not forget!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 April 2012

I agree with you.

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Charles Darkly 21 January 2012

Awesome. Simply awesome.

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April Mack 19 January 2012

Dave... I like! I Like!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 18 January 2012

There is good, but bad too everywhere and in every profession. This is your truth.

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Pheko Motaung 18 January 2012

It's a corrupt world.And this great poem exposes it all.Lovely.Thank you very much sir

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