Sunday, August 6, 2006

The Corridoor Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

It's from the corridoor of my heart
I hear a light murmering of love
Like a gentle breeze, it begins to float
In the depth and deep valley of my soul
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niranjan subhashsivan
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 October 2017

And blessed with the fragrancethanka for your line

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 08 November 2006

Subhash, I really liked this write, its probably my favorite of all you’ve posted thus far… again your delicate sensibility comes shining through. -Eila

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Asma Bahrainwala 01 November 2006

'I know a picture is painting itself'....a beautiful idea! Asma...

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Wang Jie 16 August 2006

hi, that lab! you do it very good. once a famous philosopher named Karl Marx had said if a man falls in love and he doesn't use the poem as weapon, he is unadvisable. en, you are advisable.

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Nibedita Deb 14 August 2006

A matured work. Good poem...Deb.

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Anjana Aravind 07 August 2006

The last lines are very good Anjana

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Patricia Gale 06 August 2006

Love the last stanza.. fragrance of memories.. a delightful line. Regards Patricia

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