The Corpse Of My Feelings...! ! ! Comments
You left me alone..
Without you an year has gone
Missing you, I do mourn
From dusk to dawn.
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One must learn to move on i think is the basic idea of the poem.what an idea mam jee (3G) , i.e a third generation poem.
you have the talent to express your heart in words in a nice way.liked its flow and wordplay.keep inking Pooja.
This, of course is a great image of what is there deep seated in the core of your heart.. When desire gets the way inside through the door...Love flows out of the window... Bitter truth..as is in your case..
ur feelings, style of writing, expressions, all are nice. nicely composed. a nice poem
i have an aversion of talking for the obvious reason and you have an aversion in love for same reason.....a good poem.....
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7/27/2025 7:37:43 AM # 1.0.0
It was really superb. Keep writing