Sunday, April 11, 2010

The Continuous Flame Comments

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Every other line the last two words begin with the same letter
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When all is quiet and peace prevails,
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Vic Bassetti
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Nooruddeen Mm 14 April 2010

Dear Vic, You are correct 'all is quiet when peace prevails' Nicely written, good flow and rhythm Keep writing Rgds Noor

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