Sunday, July 23, 2017

The Constant Peril Comments

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The world spins on human whims.
The falcon flies free of its tether.
Looking down from its spiraling heights
It welcomes the wind in its feathers.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2017

In the endless skies of a desert night The stars shine down on invisible life.: Such wonderful lines in this poem mesmerize mind of a reader. Earth comes alive to control life. This is very thoughtful as well as thought provoking. Nicely observed imagery of reality is presented here.10

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