Tuesday, November 29, 2022

The Consciousness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take off the wings,
no need -
to fly to those fake worlds,
and see all these ghosts
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Soran M. H
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A poem of great depth. Very thought provoking. Our journey in life must always be for the Truth. Five brilliant lines crafted with wit and wisdom. To my favorites.

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Susan Williams 23 February 2023

I love the real depth beneath your words== if we do not explore the depths and heights and the mundane between, we might as well tear the wings off our intellect and our heart and soul------exceedingly high marks for this gem

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Bharati Nayak 18 January 2023

Very insightful poem....Take off the wings, no need - to fly to those fake worlds, and see all these ghosts

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