~the Connection Comments

oh wow..cool poem..even though i dont really know who u talkin about...anyways..good job..u have a good writting skill..i can visualize this in my head as u say it in this poem..well..anyways..uh..wow..good..poem

Hello. Very good poem. A suggestion: Remove 'when' from 'way you say I love you.' You don't need it and there's no special scan to it.