The Confused Butterfly - Haiku Comments
A red butterfly,
landed on the woman's hair
with floral accents.
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No wonder if a butterfly lands on the hair of a lady it will have a floral accent because a flower can make it beautiful and not a butterfly. Awesome haiku
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You have such a thoughtful and heart touching way of expressing things! ..
Rose Marie, I would execute/'get rid of' the comma. What are floral 'accents'? Maybe you meant 'scents'? ? And did the butterfly OR the hair (which one) have accents/scents? Hmm? Let me look at your latest poem. ;) bri
It is generally difficult to spot a butterfly amid a broad bed of flowers as butterflies too have floral designs....pretty haiku....liked
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7/22/2025 5:59:18 PM # 1.0.0
The flower missing! Nice haiku. Enjoyed the poetic thought therein