Tuesday, June 21, 2016

The Conflicts Of A Balanced Mind Comments

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That may shield your ignorance
Am I too naive to believe
That you may forsake me and leave?
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Ajay Seshadri
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2016

Can appease the disintegrated From the farce of your hatred. rhythm, rhyme........ very nice endings of the lines......... conveying the conflicts..... a search for balance......... thank you very m uch for this poem. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 June 2016

A poem rich in rhythm and rhyme though it's theme is conflict. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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