Thursday, April 1, 2010

The Confirmation Comments

Rating: 3.4

Yes, yours, my love, is the right human face.
I in my mind had waited for this long,
Seeing the false and searching for the true,
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Edwin Muir
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2020

Yes, yours, my love, is the right human face. I in my mind had waited for this long, Seeing the false and searching for the true, Then found you as a traveller finds a place. a very fine poem. tony

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Richard Pardy 03 March 2020

This poem is the most beautiful that I know. My wife gave it to me and I gave it to her.

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edwin muir 05 December 2022

can i give it to her

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Annette 24 October 2019

Yes, I felt a few bits weren't quite right but it could be my memory from school over 40 yrs ago. I thought it was " Not beautiful NOR rare in every part"

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Christopher 04 January 2022

If it had been 'neither rare nor beautiful', grammar fine but rhythm lost.

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iain gordon mcfarlane 18 May 2018

? ? ? when did the word SEEM get added and by who, its whole world bright NOT whole world seem bright..? ? ? it's like graffiti on a masterpiece.

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Edwin Muir

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