Yes, yours, my love, is the right human face.
I in my mind had waited for this long,
Seeing the false and searching for the true,
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This poem is the most beautiful that I know. My wife gave it to me and I gave it to her.
Yes, I felt a few bits weren't quite right but it could be my memory from school over 40 yrs ago. I thought it was " Not beautiful NOR rare in every part"
If it had been 'neither rare nor beautiful', grammar fine but rhythm lost.
? ? ? when did the word SEEM get added and by who, its whole world bright NOT whole world seem bright..? ? ? it's like graffiti on a masterpiece.
Yes, yours, my love, is the right human face. I in my mind had waited for this long, Seeing the false and searching for the true, Then found you as a traveller finds a place. a very fine poem. tony