The Conference Of The Nightingales Comments

I like the concept of this poem, it is artistic.

Dear Shiddiqui, Thanks for your invite, Liked the poem for its originality and the universal intellectual message.Highly rated. Request you to read and comment upon my poem 'A MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR' Rajkumar

The pleasure in servitude, Comes to meet the art and skills within, It is in the beauty of knowing thine art, Against the vulgar naked greed that lies within.

A real pleasure to read. do go on.

oh how good! kudos sir!

now the refreshing poem, stated to sings its tune...such a poem that brings pleasure to the mind....God blesses this poem...a 10 +++++

The love of a child is more sacred and pure

I like it Ahmad, A very intellectual poem, you have become a nightnegale as your pen brings us the words of the empress you serve. Very good a 10. Your friend Lynn

Oh my, my, my, no need for questions...nightingale your words serve your Empress well and bring real joy to her soul-sing on through the New Year. Thanks for inviting me to read your '3' Great work 10+++

Nice poem indeed, I like the remarkable title too :) ! If you want, read and comment on my newest poem'Utopia' Thanks for sharing...

Very placid feeling from the words.

Ilove heavy with many sparkles.... and... the ripe moon.

I've not seen a nightingale but I know it's a bird specie. And I know one Nightingale who was loving and kind, she was the patron of all care givers or a nurse during one of the forgotten European wars. Wish we all have that kind of soul mate. I agree with our poet friends, the phrases and practically the lines are well written, carefully thought and choosen. You deserve a 10.

The phrases used in this piece are chosen with care - - 'the ripe moon' being one of them is especially evocative.10/10 from Fay.

our wishes are heavy with many sparkles like ripe moon bearing down the crystal lake that flies across to Greenland, and sings aloud interesting, well write dear Ahmad you as usuall