Wind directs the sea
To pound, roar, swirl, smash and surge
Great power unleashed.
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Siren Song Wave Lure Sings hypnotic is power surge rhythm tide timeless sea tired soul cannot remain awake as siren song wave lure sings sleep captures exhausted body carries mind into deep sea wave dreams Inspired by the poem 'The Conductor Of The Sea' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.
'The Conductor Of The Sea' this title is captivating, it sings in the soul 'Wind directs the sea' loved the directness of this line, the contrast with 'Great power unleashed' and the juxtaposition with the title. The conductor of wind tide current and sea can be, in the classical sense, is the god of the things; or the creator of the universe world everything.
The mental images created by this poem are awesome. The wind is a mighty conductor indeed.
Your three beauteous lines, dear great poetess, I cite them here: Wind directs the sea To pound, roar, swirl, smash and surge Great power unleashed I can imagine this vividly we had 2 days storm at Normandy, that was frightening! We felt very clear that the wind directs the sea. Marvelous haiku!
hypnotic is power surge rhythm tide timeless sea, tired soul cannot remain awake as siren song wave lure sings, sleep captures exhausted body carries mind into deep sea wave dreams
to live life breathes sea is tranquilized by wind wind- power of lives
I don't think I have ever written a haiku, but if I did, it surely wasn't as good as this one! Very powerfully done!
I feel the sweep of energy in these lines as that of the wind which causes the waters to swirl and roll! Well done, Rose Marie!
The power of the Sea, so well conveyed In all its ferocious majesty! Superbly done. We see it all Thru 3 exceptionally descriptive lines. Amazing!
This also goes to MyPoemsList. Thank you so much for creating and sharing.
Another brilliant haiku, what a greatest surprise! The Conductor Of The Sea a firm title and so unique. Indeed God is unique. He is the Conductor of the sea and more wonderous things in our universe and galaxy I am so sorry if I am misleading this passionate poem into divine but the great poetess is a true Master in brilliant haikju, I wrote earlier in the last haiku.A 10++++++and God's Blessings!
True. Wind is that power on which the sea pound, roar, swirl, smash and surge...Outstanding Haiku..10
Powerful wind with powerful expression unleashed through this poem. Brilliant Rose.......10
Storm! ! ! With the power of the wind! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A well penned amazing haiku. Truly excellent....10++
An amazing poem that in just three lines sums up of of natures elements and so, so vividly. There's a incredibly high cliff face on the Welsh coast Rose Marie called Worm's Head and on a stormy blustery day well worth a visit, for that is what the magic of your poetry conjures up great images and memories to recall. Take care thanks for sharing and will read many more tomorrow evening. Five deserved stars also.