Thursday, October 6, 2005

The Computer Doctor Comments

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Her hands were deft,
well manicured and slender
the keyboard left
one click 'return to sender'.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 06 October 2005

Hi Herbert, I liked this one a lot. I wrote one about 'tackling my computer' when I first got one, it's in among my poems if it's worth a read. Not quite as high class as yours of course. Sincerely Ernestine.

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Max Reif 06 October 2005

That's an ambitious rhyme scheme, Herbert...two rhymes per short-lined stanza. The rhymes are good.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 06 October 2005

Actually, my dear and sweet Computerdoctor, I was just dreaming. H

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 06 October 2005

Cute Herbert.....anyone I know? :)

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