Thursday, May 7, 2009

The Completion Of My World Comments

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Your light shines on when the stars don't anymore
Your heart sings when the orchestra don't roar
Your eyes dance; a glimmering of strength
When the world's dancers can't compete to any length
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Leslie Rodriguez
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When I can't find something here to make my living whole Your whole entirety is the completion of my world..... what an inside though full of meaning loud and clear... i love it. keep writing. Read mine'Silence please and send msg to poet.. that is me.

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sky dreams 15 June 2009

This is a beautiful poem.. great write =)

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Leslie Rodriguez

Leslie Rodriguez

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