Thursday, November 29, 2007

The Competition Comments

Rating: 4.7

As an aspiring poet
He was determined he'd win
He just had to meet the challenge set for him
So frantically he did scribble and scratch
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Sandra Martyres
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this poem brings a lot to mind sandra...i was a person who was writting this so called poems secretly just six month's back..accidently i hit upon this site...a chance comes to you i think...i really don't approve of competition in creativity..may be that's why this poem slipped me..here the wise neighbour is a real wise one

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Kesav Easwaran 07 January 2009

and hence this poem here...who's that good neighbour of yours who dared thunder and rain and pointed out this clear ph poem sky behind? ...good artful write...the one line, last, is more than enough for the whole write...10

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Sandra Martyres

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