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I pound the pillow, curse the clock and mock injunctions to rest.
The sun finally rises and its rays slantwise fall through the curtains as I dry my hair.
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The poem got better and better as it advanced, and I truly loved and enjoyed the final climax. Well done! Can you turn a poem into a song? If you can, I may try writing some lyrics for you.
A beautifully crafted poem of intense depth and character. A delight to read, thank you.
You describe so vividly. We are glad you survived the butterflies. I remember in school i had to stand in front of my peers to give a speech. It was nerve wracking. So i started off by saying " I am so nervous" and after i said that i relaxed. But the teacher who was grading us faulted me for saying that. I guess the more you do the more you relax. So you homework is to get your mom to stop everything and be the audience. No fighting please.
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Loved your 'Poet's Notes' too.