Monday, August 22, 2005

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when I see all the gentlefolk
sat in a row
no expression no feeling
do they now show
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A Harrie 22 August 2005

I thought it read better as sat, 'when I see them all sat' as in.. they are already sitting..and apostrophies, well other than me being incredibly lazy, they also make the piece look cluttered to me so I leave them out. sorry if you find this incorrect, well....yes it is. Thanks for your comment.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 August 2005

'sat' ought to be 'sit' (probably) . I wonder why you do not place apostrophes? H

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