Friday, June 2, 2017

The Coming Void Comments

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I am the vacuum.
I am the void you won't avoid.
I the seedless earth,
The yellow unforgiving sands,
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Tom Billsborough
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Unwritten Soul 11 June 2017

I always find uniqueness in your own way of writing, this poem sound so warm, warm heart...maybe you have summer soul inside it :) Take care always!

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Tom Billsborough 11 June 2017

Must be all that lovely fruit I eat! Must try your Mango with Chilli soon! Thanks for the comment!

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Unwritten Soul 12 June 2017

hahahaha but it is summertime, you should go for watermelon, make watermelon juice with pulp...a mixture of lemonade, mint and ice will be great for summer...

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 June 2017

Yikes! That is a very foreboding poem during a foreboding time. I hope we can avoid it, but I am afraid. I'm very, very afraid. Thanks for sharing Tom.

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Tom Billsborough 04 June 2017

, Pam. Can't decide who is worse. Your President or our feeble Prime Minister! At least in the States there are greater powers to resist and I was particularly impressed by Pittsburg's mayor. I think many states will use their power to thwart Trump's rejection of the Paris accords.

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