Saturday, March 8, 2008

The Coming Together! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Joy
In the birdsong
At dawn;
In the little children's laughter
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Usha Pisharody
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Prasanna Kumari 06 April 2008

every word is condensed with meaning and you bring out the magical power of love also...

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Soumya Sinha 06 April 2008

So delicately emotional, I just wonder if I should touch it...

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Very nice work here, Usha....Mellifluoue structure...flows like a new coin flicked 'cross the glace of an icepond. ~ FjR ~

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