Monday, July 9, 2018

The Coming Of Dusk. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The green backdoor
has some alien colors more

rather yellow-greyish-blue
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Sylvia Frances Chan
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2019

We notice from very tender movements that The green back door has more extraterrestrial colors. Colours attract attention of people like us. Golden sunbeams sneak in a dim draw and gladly dusk motivates sky and creatures with clear blue colour. Coolness of the day is felt from the breeze. A complete and interesting imagery is drawn in this excellently penned poem about dusk Cover photo is pretty one..10

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Thank you so much Madster Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your constant loyal support. God's Blessings! And for the precious 10

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Thank you so much Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your precious responses. Yes, I like very much this cover photograph. Thank you a myriad for the 10 and your valuable words about this poem.Yes, the green back door has more extraterrestrial colors. Absolutely. Once again: Thank YOU Sir!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 July 2018

A marvelous nature write. It vividly and beautifully depicted how the dusk takes a full grasp of the day. The poetess brilliant description of the changing colors is amazing. Loved reading this magnificent piece of work. One of your best, Sylvia. 10++++and onto my Poem List.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 February 2019

Thank you so much for your ardent comments and precious compliments, Mrs. Juan-Austin. I feel humbled and honoured realizing that you like this poem a very lot. Your words are mesmerizing and once again thank you for your heartwarming words. Thank you too for the 10++++.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2019

P.S. I do agree with all you wrote here. So nice in emotions to experience the joyful experience of a lady who can appreciate poetry that is thoughtfully built up. I do realize just now how indeed fascinating this is and that you said One of my best. I immediately believe you, Mrs. Juan-Austin!

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Robert Murray Smith 09 July 2018

We see the dusk in this beautifully crafted write.++10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 February 2019

Thank you for your precious visit and kindest comments. From your response I know that you like the poem. Thank you and also for the ++10, Robert. Your words most appreciated.

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Thank YOU so much, Robert!

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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