Wednesday, August 13, 2008

The Coming Light Comments

Rating: 2.7

In the darkness so far from your sight
I ran away trying to escape the night
It made no sense where could I run
The only thing that I could do was wait for the sun
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 06 December 2008

Chocolate - Values and character can not be portrayed any stronger than with soft words. Good job - Cheryl

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Emily Oldham 25 October 2008

i love this poem... so ambigous, but not too much... its so gripping and intense... keep writing- you are really talented! Athena *** words will change the world ***

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