Tuesday, July 6, 2021

The Comforters - 2 Tanka Comments

Rating: 4.9

The graves are so sad
Loved ones left them all alone
Mother Nature helps
The golden sun shares its warmth
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 21 May 2025

Beyond Words, Numbers'S! .. And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 21 May 2025

Wow! .. Magnificently expressed! .. Straight to the heart Ever so moving! ... As the loneliness is felt. And the beauty and warmth of Mother natures caring touch! ..

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Mother nature solaces grieving graves. Marvellous dear RMJ

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 July 2021

A heart touching poem. Beautifully done.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 July 2021

2) so awfully loveliest rendered, thank you so much for this Beauty,5 Stars full on Top!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 July 2021

So aptly worded, great tribute to the desolated graves, felt so crystal clear that the sun shares its warmth and the wind and rain polish them, this great tribute to the desolated graves,

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Kostas Lagos 07 July 2021

Perfection in tanka form

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Juhaina Tumlu 06 July 2021

Graveyard a temporary home.

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M Asim Nehal 06 July 2021

A heart touching Tanka...full stars

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Quaid-Uz- Zaman 06 July 2021

I love it.very nice poem.

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Li Su Pen 06 July 2021

Full of life living words!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 July 2021

A moving tanka, with rich, lovely imagery.5 stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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