Sunday, October 18, 2015

The Comet's Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

A million mile tail.
Tracing an invisible line.
Tearing through dark matter.
Ice on fire scorching-nothing.
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Edmund Strolis
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Saheb Mohapatra 18 October 2015

yes...........this is the epitome of what we call a pure nature poem..........well-crafted..........you have chosen the best path to gild your poignant words.

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Pamela Sinicrope 18 October 2015

Beautiful poem and loved the picture. The vivid imagery flowed off of you pen and into my imagination. Loved it!

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